Liz
5/2/2014 04:12:55 am
Very clear and very thorough! I liked how you transitioned at the end, too. Keep playing Minecraft!
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Jaryah Jackson
5/5/2014 04:05:31 am
I liked the pictures and how you described what you do and different activities you do.
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Red Da Paladin
5/6/2014 04:09:12 am
I liked how you said life in evanston was good. but I think you used the creaky old stairs picture too much. But otherwise its good so... GOOD JOB!
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