Aman
3/24/2014 04:19:15 am
Nice Pictures ;)
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Jaylen Burns
3/24/2014 04:19:42 am
I agree with all the you said like drowning in the because we are so close to the city. The stanza when you said "my little bubble" like that part.
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Jaylen Burns
3/24/2014 04:24:16 am
I like your pictures they are sad and touching at the same time. I like it.
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Jaryah Jackson
3/25/2014 04:08:00 am
I like the pictures you chose and the story you put behind it.
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perry
3/25/2014 04:09:38 am
for slide 6 I liked how you said she can no longer see the sun and green is surrounding her I also liked the wording
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Isabel
3/25/2014 04:18:58 am
I like that along with the description of the story, you incorporate the emotions of the characters in it. The fact that the story has details and emotions, makes the effect far better.
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